Dude, where's my flying car? A concrit post

[idealism]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Playing a recovering suicidal, undead alcoholic with inferiority complexes tends to challenge a player, so I thought I'd put one of these up.  All crit will be screened, and absolutely EVERY crit is welcome.  Seriously, do I make him too silly?  Do I need to practice his voice?  Tell me in comments.